Damn you cartoon u missed a frigging point point blank, scowled the one of the shooters...Abhishek was down in the ground wenching in pain.. did not know what hit him..it was the standard issue FN Browning Gp35 9mmx19mm bullet,it was his temple that hit.
Bloody joker, we need to bury him now.
Sorry saabji replied the other shooter in low key voice.
They were two of the elitest of marksmen in the country, and they had marked their man well from the international Bus depot they , since he arrived. From Saltlake to Esplanade they followed him from noon to dark they were his shadow, waiting for the opportune moment. The man had no clue what fate he had, their order was simple shoot to kill.
The Man had gone to the biriyani shop in the afternoon..they had their lunch at the table behind..then to the movies they followed him for the raunchy C grade soft porn flick.. They for a moment thought were they behind the right man..was he the Conspirator, or just another tourist from across.
Even with their doubts they followed him ..now to a bar, no, no way can be a conspirator. Yet their orders were simple shoot to kill. The man was a guzzler drank cheap whiskeys after another.. they could not seat idle them selves.. as his count increased.. so did theirs..they did not want any body to be suspicious.
This was now the man made his mistake, he streched his arms to yawn in a very sozzled fashion, giving them a sneak peak of his pot belly, and the colt double eagle, cozied in his trouser..
Thats an expensive weapon for a lout like him, they knew they had their man.
" saabji yehi tapkaun kya?" Sir should i take him down right now? asked the junior personnel..'nehi hume presswalo ka jhanjhat nehi chai ye" No we dont want the press hounding us replied the superior.. there were far too many people in the bar.
"Bahar jake thokte saale ko" will shoot him once he is out.
It was 11:30 in the night, Abhishek a bit drunk him self came out of the bar lit a smoke , he was expecting a call since evening which never came..
he should not be in this part of the town at this hour he thought, but were will find cheap liquor when your wallet does not assist you at the end of the month.
More so he was in this sulky mood whole day and needed a drink, he came here for some work.. but cheap booze stopped him and made him miss the last metro .
He was walking down the alley as many a taxi refused him to take him to his destination, as they thought he was drunk, and this was no up market locality.
He was walking when his phone rang .
They had taken their aim, it was difficult as the man was walking like a crab now.. was in state of drunkenness could not walk straight, yes we will take him down at the turn, they thought.
They aimed and they shot.. right at that moment the man bumped into a young guy who was about to take his phone out from his pocket..
Both fell.. abhishek was bleeding and and the man had passed out.
"Saale point blank tha woh.. Chal ambulance bula dekhte hai zinda hai mar gaya..
Chal chal usko thok."
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That was a point blank you idiot.. anyway call an ambulance, and check if he is alive...and shoot the other bastard was the order.
Saabji he is alive.. but in shock.. lucky ass just has a flesh wound. the bullet grazed his temple .. worse sabji, we need a hush up
and the marksman started laughing like a rogue.. my name is Shiva..
Shiva's browning cracked twice more.. with the silencer it was just soft thuds.. now mistake this time.
Abhishek woke uo at a nursing home.. all his bills were already paid. He had a letter right next to him.
You saw nothing, and a cheque with a seven figure some on it...50 lakhs to be precise.
Abhishek still had no clue what happened..the bullet grazed his temple leaving a wide horizontal mark.. it resembled the the parallel marks of shivites or devotees of lord Shiva were on their forhead.. the Mark of Shiva.
If his phone did not ring that day he would never have been shot.. if he was not shot , he would not be as rich to be precise..
Thursday, August 23, 2007
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3 comments:
Good one... I like the context... and especially the sudden emergence of it... but I'm a ittle surprised at the fact that Abhishek keeps appearing in your blogs... a favorite, is he?
really some study you did to dig this one up - bravo.
also, i see a bit of an influence :-)
but a nice story and a nice step forward. welcome to the dark world. keep writing.
inputs i shall give you one on one
and, @ nazneen
abhishek is a character he doesnt mind doing anything with - abhishek, to him, is a dead name. you may contact abhigyan for details :-)
thanks Naz.. yes Abhishek is Suraj Barjatia's Prem for me.. he is going to be my protagonist.. rather he will be the only character with a name in My short stories.. even in this story i needed to give the shooter Shiva as his name.. but only at the end not in the beginning.. i want it to be my style..
Dada One on One man to man Mano a mano ( that actually means hand to hand) that rings a bell, ill leave darwanji a spare key when i leave for Pune just trying to be careful..
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